Thursday, July 7, 2011

Battling the Depths-A warrior cats Fan Fiction

                


                                    Battling the Depths

                            Characters: 


ThunderClan                                                                 RiverClan

Leader: Sorrelstar                                                          Leader: Mistystar

Deputy: Smokefall                                                        Deputy: Cinderleaf

Medicine Cat: Destinyshine   
App: Echopaw                                                           Medicine Cat: Littlesun
Warriors                                                                         App: Lakepaw
 -SwiftShadow                                       
 App: Pebblepaw                                                                                     Warriors
- Blackspark                                                              -Mothflight
App: Sunpaw                                                             App: Reedpaw

-Hazelwing                                                                      -Snowbound
 App: Silentpaw                                                                                      App: Icepaw
- Whitegaze
App: Jaypaw                                                                     - Geckofoot  
                                                                                             -OtterStream    

- Berryfur 
- Lionstorm
App: Graypaw
-  Bramblewind                                                            -Rushwhisker
App: Stormpaw
Elders:                                                                               Elders:

- Brackenheart                                                                   -Mallowtail
                                                                                            -Swallowfur

Queens:                                                                             Queens:

-Windtalon  (Blackspark)                                                     -Fawnheart
Kits: Graykit, Pebblekit, Echokit                           Kits: (Kinkpaw, Reedpaw)
-Meadowtuft  (Berryfur)                                                            -Rosesand
Kits: Stormkit, Silentkit (Silentstep)                                Kits: Cottonkit, Shardkit







ShadowClan                                                                                   WindClan

Leader: Russetstar                                                                          Leader: Swiftstar

Deputy:  Briarclaw                                                                        Deputy: Brindletooth

Medicine Cat:  Mooncloud                                                   Medicine Cat: Tawnybird
 App: Shimmerpaw        

Warriors:                                                                                       Warriors:

- Treeblaze                                                                                         -Hollowtail
App: Rainpaw                                                                               App: Wavepaw

-  Pinkfur                                                                                           - Snowdrift
                                                                                                          App: Burrowpaw

-Mosspool                                                                                         -Thorntail
App: Mistpaw
- Stealthstripe                                                                                    -Tallfoot
                                                                                                           App: Kinkpaw

Queen(s):                                                                                  Queen(s):

-Brightice     (Stealthstripe)                                      -Skylight
Kits: Dreamkit, Rainkit, Vinekit                Kits: (Wavepaw, Burrowpaw, Kinkpaw)
 -Cloudvein (Treegaze)
  Kits: (Shimmerpaw, Mistpaw)
  
Elders:                                                                             Elders:

- Mousekink                                                            Shallowshine






  Battling the Depths



     Pebblekit opened one eye, letting the morning smell of leaf-bare waft around her nose. She let out a reluctant huff. "Momma, why did leaf-bare have to come so early!" she complained, lifting her head. Windtalon smiled and laughed, licking her daughter's head to soften the anger that shown through her unkept fur. 
     "The seasons and it's changes are Starclan's giving's. With good seasons that are plentiful, like green-leaf, there comes bad as well", she explained. Pebblekit frowned, some times she seemed to think Starclan was mouse brained. Windtalon nudged her kit, "Go share tongues with the others, let your brother and sister rest." Pebblekit let out a silent laugh. Her brother, Graykit was splayed across Ivypaw, his paw practically laying over her nose.
     Windtalon just smiled, "Go on." Pebblekit carefully made her way over her brother and sister, with each step, her paws made no sound. Pebblekit was proud of herself! At this rate, she'd be the greatest stalker in the clan!
     'Stop daydreaming and get over us already" Echokit grumbled, stretching out her neck to yawn and curling back up with her brother. "Ok, ok!" She leaped out of the nursery, looking over at her clan sharing tongues. Pebblekit spotted Whitegaze and Bramblewind grooming each other under the Highrock. Their activities had become very suspicious lately. Stormkit came out of nowhere, bowling her over in a heap of snow and grass. Instinctively, she batted his belly with her hind legs and twisted her body, slipping out of his grip and facing him.
     "You call that sharing tongues?!" Pebblekit laughed, lunging at him.
     "Sure, why not!" Stormkit chuckled, dodging her attack. Pebblekit grasped his ear lightly with her jaws, and climbed on top of him with sheathed claws. "Hey!" He said before collapsing onto his belly under her weight. "What have you been eating?"
     "Oh, be quiet you" she giggled.
     "You both should be quiet," Berryfur informed them, grabbing Stormkit by the scruff and sitting him up, "This isn't play time." Stormkit's ears lied flat against his head, "Sorry, Berryfur..." A playful glint in his eye was still shown as he glanced at Pebblekit. Berryfur noticed and batted his ear in a fatherly way, "Now go find someone to share tongues with, I'm going to visit your mother" he purred. Once Berryfur had padded away, Stormkit looked to Pebblekit and shrugged, flicking his tail for her to follow. Pebblekit watched as the sun reflected off of his bluish gray fur. He led her to a spot where the snow was shallow and began digging the snow away from the spot. Pebblekit decided to join in, guessing he wanted to share tongues with her here. She smiled with delight as they finally settled down next to each other. She groomed his neck fur while he licked her ears, the hairs on his tongue rough, but comfortable.
     "Flirting, anyone?" Echokit's voice sounded behind them. Pebblekit gave her sister the 'go away, I'm busy' look, and she instantly crouched to laugh, but turned and bounded away. Pebblekit blushed, "Sorry about that"
     "It's fine" Stormkit shrugged and continued grooming her. Pebblekit purred in relaxation. The passed couple days had been hard for the warriors. Patrols were constantly being taken out for hunting, and checking scent markers for any clans looking for more hunting grounds. "We'll be apprentices soon." Stormkit's voice brought her back. Pebblekit's blue eyes turned icy with excitement, "We sure will, I can't wait to learn some battle moves and take down a Windclan warrior!" she exclaimed, her tail tip twitching madly.
     "Windclan isn't to be worrying about it sounds," his gaze had averted towards Sorrelstar, Smokefall, Hazelwing, Lionstorm, and Swiftshadow.
     Swiftshadow
Pebblekit breathed. Stormkit looked at her in awkward silence. "Sorry..." Pebblekit whispered. Swiftshadow was her favorite warrior! Brave, one of the best fighters and hunters. Always put her clan before herself...'I bet Starclan is very proud of her...' she thought.
     "Shadowclan scents? Near the Old Oaks?!" Sorrelstar's voice was heard from both Pebblekit and Stormkit. She hadn't realized that they were the two cats closest to the leader and her patrol. "We detected the scent of Briarclaw, Pinkfur and Mooncloud," Hazelwing reported.
      "Mooncloud?" the leader's fur bristled, "Are you sure it was Mooncloud?" Sorrelstar asked. Lionstorm nodded. Smokefall looked towards Swiftshadow for answers, but the senior warrior just flicked her tail to Hazelwing. "What would Shadowclan be doing with their deputy and medicine cat inside our borders?"
     "Maybe they were trying to come and talk to us" Lionstorm suggested.
     "Then why wouldn't Russetstar be with them?" Swiftshadow challenged. Sorrelstar just blinked, turning her head to Stormkit and Pebblekit who she just noticed were watching. She frowned, "Smokefall, take these two back to the nursery," Sorrelstar then turned to Lionstorm, "You've been working hard today, rest and bring Blackspark over. Swiftshadow, lead another patrol to inspect the area." The Thunder leader spun around and padded back into her den, ears flicking with thought. Smokefall came over to Pebblekit and Stormkit and began guiding them to the nursery with his tail.


    "Smoketail, is there gonna be a battle?" Stormkit asked excitedly, not recognizing Pebblekit's prickling pelt beside him. She hesitated a moment, but then realized this could be her chance to watch the warriors in action!
     "If they do can we come and watch!" Her eyes sparkled.
     "Look," he told the kits, stopping at the nursery entrance, "This is no time to be asking questions, we're very busy at the moment. Shadowclan have been snooping around for days, and of course we wouldn't let you come and watch! A battle ground is no place for kits to be!" Smoketail eyed Pebblekit, astonished that she'd asked that question. Pebblekit felt embarrassed. With her tail dragging on the ground, she slunk into the nursery to find Berryfur with Meadowtuft. Pebblekit jumped as she felt Stormkit's pelt rub against hers as he squeezed into the den and passed her, flopping in between his parents.
     "There's gonna be a battle with Shadowclan!" he announced.
     "What!," Windtalon exclaimed with a jump, "Where did u here this?" she turned to her kit, whispering so as to not wake Pebblekit's littermates.
     "Pebblekit and I were sharing tongues by the Highrock..." Stormkit started.
     "And we over heard Lionstorm's patrol saying that their had been a lot of scents concerning Shadowclan on the borders at the Old Oaks and..."
 The three cats looked at each other, Meadowtuft nodded to Berryfur and they both rummaged their way out and into the clearing to figure out what was going on. Pebblekit looked towards her mother, "Oh...and...Blackspark is leading a patrol to investigate the area some more." Windtalon seemed quite calm at that fact, but she sighed, looking towards all of the kits in the nursery and back to Meadowtuft, "As long as he's just investigating and not suddenly fighting at the moment, that's fine dear," She flicked her tail, "Now come over here and wake up these two lazy squirrels," she chuckled. Stormkit and her exchanged mischievous glances at their sleeping kin. Pebblekit jumped and toppled over Echokit and Graykit, their surprised squeaks hurting her sensitive ears. But she didn't care. She was laughing so hard as Stormkit tickled Silentkit's nose with a feather from the bedding.
     "Hey!" she mewled, batting her brother away, "What was that for?"
     "It's time to wake up!" He told her, lunging at her. But as quick as a fox, she silently stepped aside and Stormkit landed face first into his mothers bedding.
     "They don't call her Silentkit for nothing!" Echokit purred, "You should know that by now, Stormkit" Graykit looked up at Windtalon with a questioning look.
     "Why isn't Meadowtuft in here?" he asked. "Yeah!" Echokit was puzzled as she just now noticed. Silentkit collapsed over her wobbly legs, "Where IS Meadowtuft?!" Stormkit rolled his eyes.
     "Don't start having an anxiety attack again," he told her after explaining what him and Pebblekit had witnessed, "Should I get Destinyshine now or later?" he laughed, eyes shining in sarcasm. Silentkit began rolling around, eyes burning with pricks of pain. "NOW!" she said. Windtalon bolted out of her nest and headed to Silentkit right away.
Pebblekit gasped.
Thorns
"Who puts thorns in bedding?!" Pebblekit screeched, seeing her littermate's legs seeping with blood from several thorns that seemed to have buried themselves in her flesh. Graykit was out of the nursery in a flash, his little legs pelting across the clearing to the medicine cat den right away.
     "Calm down, Silentkit, it's not that bad," Windtalon shushed her.
     "But I'm bleeding!" Silentkit whimpered, lifting one of her legs to examine three thorns that hurt like a bee sting. Destinyshine and Graykit burst into the den, Destinyshine carrying a bundle of herbs in her mouth. The medicine cat tilted her head after grabbing Silentkit by the scruff and placing her in a thorn-clear area.
     "No, Windtalon is right. It's just a few drops of blood" Destinyshine started on her wounds, gently pulling out the thorns, one by one and piling them away from the nests. Once she was done, and successfully fed her two poppy seeds and lathered her small wounds with marigold, Silentkit was back on her feet.
     "By the way, Silentkit how did thorns make you fall on your face? Did they really hurt that bad?" Graykit asked. Windtalon cuffed his ear, "Be nice".
      "I was just asking!" he complained, padding over to stand next to Pebblekit and Echokit. Silentkit shook her head.
       "No, but what little pain there was took my by surprise, that's all"
       "We're glad your alright...but I'll start removing any more thorns that I find" Windtalon informed.
     "Thanks" she breathed. Pebblekit pounced of the dens, just in time to see a large patrol heading towards the camp entrance.
     "There's no way in Starclan's right mind that that's a hunting or border patrol..." Stormkit whispered, coming up beside her along with Echokit.
      "No way," Echokit gasped, "They're headed out for battle!"



Graykit and Silentkit raced out with them, jaws dropping in panic. "What are we going to do!" Echokit squealed.
    "Nothing, mouse brain! We're kits, we can't do anything but shield ourselves in our stupid dens" Stormkit huffed. Graykit came up to Pebblekit and began nudging her back into the nursery, but she wouldn't budge.
     "Pebblekit!," Silentkit called to her, "Come on, your mother is calling us back inside! Quick!"
Pebblekit still wouldn't move. Neither would Stormkit. Both of their mothers were back in the nursery, yowling at them to get their hindquarters in the dens. The two littermates glanced at one another, and before their brothers and sisters


knew it, they were already through the dirt place tunnel and into Thunderclan territory.
     "Let's find our way to the patrol! I'm tired of hiding while the warriors do all of the work!" Pebblekit growled. "Your not the only one," Stormkit hissed, "Come on, let's go this way and follow the patrol's scent...Wait," he stopped, "Whose scent are you best at familiarizing?"
     Pebblekit smiled. "Swiftshadow's"
   "I'm best at Whitegaze" he told her.
   "Whitegaze? Why her?"
   "She's friends with Windtalon and Meadowtuft, I scent her lingering smell every once in awhile in the nursery."
  "Haha, alright," Pebblekit agreed, "Let's stop the jibber jabber and find the patrol!"
   Stalking side by side, it wasn't long until each of them detected their chosen cats. They met eye contact and hid in the bushes, watching the patrol pass by before one cat suddenly stopped. It was Hazelwing!
     "Smell that?" Hazelwing called to Bramblewind. The strong shouldered tom walked up beside Hazelwing.
    "Smells like two kits who need to head back to their nursery before a couple of warriors find them. Their apprenticeship could easily be delayed if Sorrelstar ever found out" the young tom spoke to the brown tabby she-cat beside him. Pebblekit and Stormkit gulped, meeting eye contact and rushing back to the dirtplace tunnel.
     "I'm sorry, Pebblekit, but nothing is worth more to me right now then becoming an apprentice." Stormkit admitted.  "Same here...I still wish we could snoop in on it all" She pouted.
     "Hey, look on the bright side!," Stormkit said, running his grayish tail under her chin, one of the warriors are sure to tell Brackenheart! I bet she'll tell us afterwards." He grinned, scooting her silently into the clearing. "Let's slink back into the nursery, maybe we'll get less punishment if we do..."
     "I doubt that" she laughed. "It's worth a shot" he shrugged. Pebblekit nodded in agreement. The two littermates padded on hushed paws into the nursery, only to be met by two enraged queens. Each were grabbed by the scruff and plopped on the bedding next to their siblings.
     "You two are in big trouble tomorrow morning" Meadowtuft scolded. Pebblekit heard Stormkit sigh and respond to his mother, "We know we are...just please don't tell Sorrelstar..."
Pebblekit tried hiding herself from her own mother by squirming underneath Graykit who purred. But Windtalon let out a slow breath of air.
    "Why would we tell Sorrelstar something that would delay your apprentice ceremony for days instead of tomorrow?"

     The whole nursery seemed to light up and the air felt exhilarating. Pebblekit felt her littermates excitement like a thorn tickling her pelt...


"And last but not least, Pebblekit, do you promise to train and work hard to become a strong warrior for the protection of your clan?" Sorrelstar asked her as they both sad tall and proud on top of the Highrock.
    "I do" Pebblekit shook with pleasure.
    "Then from this day on, until you have received your warrior name, you shall be known as Pebblepaw. Swiftshadow, I know that you will give this apprentice great wisdom and strength and teach her all you know."  The light brown she cat dipped her head, "I will, Sorrelstar".
     "Pebblepaw! Pebblepaw! Pebblepaw!" her clanmates shouted below. As they bellowed her name, she padded over and touched noses with her mentor. Silentpaw had received Hazelwing, Stormpaw was paired with Bramblewind, Graypaw earned Lionstorm...but Echokit refused to be given a mentor...
     "I'll be taking the roll as a fill in for medicine cat apprentice...I think that may be the path I'd like to take" Echokit apologized to Sorrelstar for the misunderstanding.
     "No, young one, you are quite fine. The path of a medicine cat is a great one. Destinyshine will gladly take  you in so that you can make your final decision by nightfall tomorrow"
    Destinyshine nodded in agreement and Echokit met her gaze with happiness...
Pebblepaw congratulated her sister. But she still couldn't believe that this is what she wanted...
     "Pebblepaw? Are you alright? Are you unhappy with the choice that I made?" Echokit sounded worried. She didn't want that.
     "Not at all! Your my sister, if you're happy I'm happy. I'll always support you in the great choices you'll make..." Pebblepaw touched muzzles with her.
     "Thanks, Pebblepaw..." She nodded her head in thanks before twisting around and heading into the medicine cat den to start her new job and finally be able to make her life's decision. Stormpaw streamed past her, meeting her gaze and smiling before teaming up with Bramblewind and disappearing through the bramble entrance.
      'Just made an apprentice and he's already out with his mentor...I wonder what Swiftshadow is up to' She thought, padding towards the warriors den. She poked her head in,
     "Swiftshadow?" she whispered, spotting her sand brown pelt. The warrior opened her eyes and a glint of green blazed on Pebblepaw's pelt.

"Yes, Pebblepaw?" the senior warrior yawned. Pebblepaw scooted her way in after seeing that only a couple warriors were laying in to rest.
    "I-I was just wondering...When will our first session of training be? Stormpaw and Bramblewind have already gone out to start their training". She felt like a kit again, complaining on first hand about something she hasn't gotten to do yet. 'How embarrassing!' her pelt began to burn. Swiftshadow smiled and looked at her apprentice with slight laughter,
     "Very soon, young one. I was out all day yesterday and fought in the battle. I'm sorry if that disappoints you, but I need to rest" Her eyes were glazed in sleep.
The battle!
Pebblepaw jumped to her paws, "Oh please tell me about it! Did you get any wounds?" the young apprentice tried to stay quiet, searching Swiftshadow's pelt to answer her question. Swiftshadow hulled herself up and nosed Pebblepaw out of the den,
    "Go find Brackenheart. She practically begged about the story as well, and Whitegaze gladly told her. I'm sure she is itching from head to tail tip to tell someone." the warrior yawned. Pebblepaw's eyes lit up in anticipation, bounding over to the elders den to find Brackenheart chewing on a rather skinny mouse. The elder's eyes met hers and she purred in delight,
    "I knew you'd come to hear about the battle."
    "You bet I would!" Pebblepaw smiled, plopping down beside Brackenheart outside of the elder's den and starring at her with huge eyes, that she started the story right away...


     Swiftshadow scanned the battle clearing once they arrived, the combat patrol was there before them. Her tail  was flat on the ground and her ears were laid back. The dark gray tom, Stealthstripe moved in on her, but she scented him before he was even a fox-length away. Lunging, she bowled the tom over, scraping at his belly his her hind legs. She bit his ear, and blood seeped from the wound. Stealthstripe flipped her over and off, but she was up before him. With one swift move, she flanked his side, paw outstretched as she hit the warrior's back tendon, and watched him collapsed under his weight. Swiftshadow let out a victory yowl and left him there; stunned.
     Moving to the next warrior, she spotted Hazelwing and Treeblaze battling roughly near a tree. Several times she had noticed that Treeblaze had been thrusting her Clanmates into the trunk. A growl rose in her throat and she lashed her tail, wiggling her hindquarters to prepare for a fight. But Russetstar's voice rang over the battle.
    "Shadowclan! Surrender!" Her yowl broke what seemed to be never ending growls. The Shadowclan cats yowled in defeat, racing back into the depths of their own territory.



     "That's it?" Pebblepaw's astonished mew rang throughout the den. "But...But I don't understand!"
     "It turns out what we thought was an attempted ambush to raid our boundaries, it was just Briarclaw and his other clanmates trying to cross so that they could speak with us. Russetstar wasn't there because it all boils down to Mooncloud needed Destinyshine's assistance." Brackenheart's mew became clouded in waves of grief.
     "So Russetstar is..."
     "Ill, yes. They wouldn't tell us if it was her last life or not. I'm assuming it is." Brackenheart sighed.
Brackenheart cared about Shadowclan's leader?!
The elder noticed Pebblepaw's suspicion, "Many clans do, you know. We fight to stay alive, argue to show our lack of weakness, but many cats have known Russetstar a long time and remember the great memories of her. In a way, we're all a giant clan."
     "Then why don't we become one?" Pebblepaw's voice cracked at the thought.
     "Starclan would never want that to happen. And we live by Starclan's will." Pebblepaw sighed, and placed her head on her paws starring at the soft moss,
     "I'm starting to think Starclan is a bit crazy..."
     "Nonsense! Starclan protects us, and most importantly guides us all in survival. There is much worse out there, Pebblepaw and you should be thankful for them," She looked toward the stars that began to shine through the orange glowing sky, "There are some things in this world that best left the way they are."

1 comment:

  1. I think thatt the story is great/Awesome

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